Tuesday 3 August 2021

My 100 word story!

Hello there! My class and I for writing we are making 100 word storys. Why you ask well we are making them because our teacher wants us to be good at editing our storys to a certain amount of words. Here is my story I made! 

 The man ran up to his gleaming black Ferrari Laferrari, opened the door and started it, the V12 roared into life echoing around the dead carpark. It’s engine screaming after its cold start roared into life echoing around the eerie forest. He took off skipping along the tarmac screaming down the streets. He arrived at his house, turned off the engine and hopped out of his car. He strolled down the footpath, his footsteps echoing around his lawn. He walked up to the door, unlocked it and went inside. He yelled “Honey I’m home.” No one answered. He was panicking. Well thats all from me see you next time!

2 comments:

  1. Hi Xavier.
    I like your post. Your 100 word story is great and has a lot of cool words.
    I just want to ask, I looked at how many words your story has and it has 155 words. Is it mean't to be a 100 word story or around 100 words?
    How long did it take you to make this story?

    Blog Ya LATER!

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  2. Hey Antonio,
    Thanks for the helpful comment. Where did you get the extra 55 words from the first paragraph? Anyways don't count the first paragraph.
    Blog Ya Later

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